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【短篇翻译】彩虹工厂:噩梦【二次结局】
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瑞瑞白 阿杰黄
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发表于 2019-01-13 • 3人收藏 • 1204人看过

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Rainbow Factory Alternate Ending: The Nightmare

彩虹工厂:噩梦

作者:jeffschoolemail12

原文:https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10067142/1/Rainbow-Factory-Alternate-Ending-The-Nightmare

译者:ShineSky

头图:瞎找了几个ps了一下

简介:飞板璐在梦中梦到了彩虹工厂,云宝黛西却告诉她没有这一切,而飞行考试中,飞板璐又是否能成功通过,又或者变成彩虹呢,在这里一探究竟。

备注:这是我第一次翻译,肯定不太好,希望读者能指出。感谢EqCN读者群里的几位大佬的调教【指导】,感谢榴莲炸弹魔法士ponymaDreamsSetFree的指导。在这里面有一句话引用了啸夜及其整个翻译组在《彩虹工厂》中的翻译【PS:我修改过了,没在用了,因为那个太别扭了】


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还有回复可见,你学坏了啊

回复 【短篇翻译】彩虹工厂:噩梦【二次结局】

你把其他人写上去啊,我啥正经忙都没帮啊

CelestAI  FakeAI #3
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回复#1 @榴莲炸弹 :

还不是跟你学的

CelestAI  FakeAI #4
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回复#2 @榴莲炸弹 :

你帮了,你打击了我,让我化悲愤为力量【雾】

魔法师T_T  站务 #5
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"Oh, no," she squealed. She was in the theater room again. Only, by now, it was full of suited ponies, circling her, their masked faces seemed to be grinning at her as Rainbow Dash shouted orders down the vent.

  "啊,不要啊!"她发出一声尖叫,发现自己又回到那间大厅里了。与之前不同的是,身着制服天马此刻站满了四周将她团团围住云宝黛西通过管道开口大声咆哮着发号施令,那些戴着面具的脸似乎便对着她不怀好意地笑了起来

"Wake up." She heard a voice coming from nowhere.

  "快醒醒。她突然听到一阵不知何处传来的呼唤

Scootaloo was tossing and turning in the bed that was next to Rainbow Dash's bed. Sweat protruded from her head. Rainbow dash took her right hoof and tried to wake Scootalo up.

  飞板璐在云宝黛西旁边的床上翻来覆去,汗水不断从头上冒出而云宝黛西正抓住她的右蹄,试图将她叫醒

"Scoot! Wake up, It's okay" The voice shouted. The suited ponies began to grab her and take her to the rainbow processing machine.

  "飞板璐! 醒醒,没事的"那个声音仍在呼喊穿着制服的天马们开始拽住她,将她拖往彩虹制造机

"No,no, PLEASE NO!" Scootaloo screamed in her sleep.

  "不!不!不!求求你!不要啊!飞板璐在梦中尖叫起来

"Scootaloo! You're having a nightmare, wake up!" the voice called out. The ponies were about to drop her into the machine when a voice snapped her out of her nightmare.

  "飞板璐,你在做噩梦!快醒醒!那声音再次大喊 就在她即将被扔进机器的一刻,一阵呼唤将她拽出了梦魇。

"SCOOTALOO!" Rainbow Dash yelled to snap her out of her nightmare.

  "飞——板——璐黛西的呼唤终结了她的噩梦

Scootaloo looked at Rainbow dash with a pitiful expression, tears welled down her eyes.

  飞板璐满脸哀求地看着云宝,泪水从两眼涌出。

"You...Still...Love...Me...Right?" Scootaloo said, breaking down.

  “你还……爱着我的……对吧?”她说着,嚎啕大哭起来。

Rainbow dash pulled her into a hug, and Scootaloo began to sob into her shoulder.

  云宝将小璐抱进怀里后者则将头埋在她的肩上抽泣着

"What on Earth makes you think I don't, silly?" Dash asked.

  "小傻瓜,你怎么会认为我不爱你了呢?黛西(轻声)问道。

"I had a dream there was a final exam for flight school, and I failed. There was this place where Rainbows are made from pegasi that fail the exam, and you were the manager, and you said you were dead to me and that you wanted to kill me yourself."

  "我刚刚梦到飞行学院有一次最终考试,然而我考砸了。没通过考试的天马会被送进去做成彩虹是那里的经理。你你对我早就死心了甚至要亲杀了我。"

Rainbow dash took Scootaloo and placed her right front hoof on her face and smiled.

  云宝黛西笑着拉起了飞板璐,将自己的的右前蹄放在她脸上。

"Listen, If any of this were true, someone would be BOUND to slip out such information to Celestia. I'd get in big trouble and me and everyone who worked there would likely get banished from Equestria." She replied reassuringly.

  "听着,如果这真要有一点可能性肯定会有小马将事情通报给塞拉斯蒂亚到时我就会惹上大麻烦,那儿的全部员工也都会被放逐出小马国的"她安慰地说

"Besides, I would NEVER try to kill you. I wouldn't even THINK of trying to kill you. You're my little sister, and there's NOTHING that can change that, you hear me?"

  "再说了,我绝不可能要杀你,我连想都不会想。你可是我的妹妹,这一点永远都不会改变,知道了吧?"

Scootallo stopped crying and gave Rainbow Dash a final hug before going back to bed.

  飞板璐停止了抽泣,并在回到床上前最后拥抱了一下黛西

"Hey, Scoot." Rainbow Dash called.

  "嘿,小璐"黛西突然说。

"Yeah, sis?"

  "什么事吗,姐姐?"

"Want me to watch you take the finals?" Rainbow Dash asked.

  "想让我参加你的飞行考试吗?云宝黛西问道。

"Yeah!" Scootaloo replied joyfully before going back to sleep.

  "太棒了!飞板璐愉快地回答接着便回到了梦中



有一些我自己的意译,不一定对,仅供参考。

魔法师T_T  站务 #6
回复 【短篇翻译】彩虹工厂:噩梦【二次结局】

另外标题叫《另一个结局》更好一些。

CelestAI  FakeAI #7
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回复#1 @魔法师T_T :

感谢啊

CelestAI  FakeAI #8
回复 梦魇

回复#1 @魔法师T_T :

飞行考试哪里我觉得是参观,就是在看台上坐着

魔法师T_T  站务 #9
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回复#3 @Shine Sky :

啊对,参观。我只是觉得“参加”也不一定是去加入比赛,就好像:“参加毕业典礼”,也不一定是要去做报告。

“参观”挺好的,“观看”也行,得再琢磨琢磨

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五星好评

CelestAI  FakeAI #11
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回复#1 @自由之风 :

感谢支持,这是我翻译的第一篇文章,你给了我很大动力。

1516  幻形灵 #12
回复 梦魇

很棒的呀(如果语言上能在灵活一点就好了,部分句子读上去仍有点奇怪

回复 梦魇

你这是从fimfiction里面翻译的吗?

1516  幻形灵 #14
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回复#6 @Shine Sky :

Emmm,比如“满是制服天马”我没见过这种表达……虽然知道你的意思

云宝黛西管道开口又是个啥

“他们戴着面具的脸看起来就像是在盯着她。”这句可参考魔法师的,你这么译总觉得怪怪的……

剩下的也自己看看把,不再赘述~

CelestAI  FakeAI #15
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回复#7 @LosticshyPam :

不是,是从fanfiction,一个不出名的网站。

1516  幻形灵 #16
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回复#9 @Shine Sky :

估计早期作品了 至少在这一篇里觉得很怪

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感觉第二章比第一章翻译的好些【这是我看过最短的翻译了】

回复 【短篇翻译】彩虹工厂:噩梦【二次结局】

???还有这种操作?

CelestAI  FakeAI #19
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回复#22 @accero :

就是有这种操作

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